Saturday, July 06, 2013
At The Rodeo
Once upon a time, there were two cowboys. One was named Bart and the other was named
Gideon. Bart was nicknamed “Black
Bart”. He had a black streak mask that
was covering his face. Gideon was tall and handsome. One day they were racing in a horse race. When they were ready to race, they went to
the starting line. Then the announcer
yelled, “On your marks, get set, go!” Then they were off. At first, they had to jump over hurdles. They jumped one hurdle after another. The horses
looked like maniacs. They were making
funny faces. Then, suddenly they saw the
deadliest obstacles of all. Rattlesnakes! “Uh oh!’’ panicked Bart. They galloped around the snakes avoiding the danger. Then when they got to the last hurdle, a pond jump, something crazy happened. Bart
broke the rules by ending up in the water with his horse. Gideon jumped over
the pond with his horse under his bottom.
Gideon commanded “Gideon-up!” And they flew through the water. Since
they both broke the rules, they had to start over. They went back to the
starting line. The announcer yelled for one last time, “On your mark, get set,
GO!!!!!!!!!!” Then they followed the rules. The results were Bart lost and
Gideon won. Gideon won a prize. It was a golden horse trophy. Gideon was excited because he was the winner,
but Bart felt terrible because he broke the rules and lost. Looking back,
Gideon and Bart learned that if you do not listen to the rules you won’t win.
The End
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7 comments:
Luca: What a great story! And I heard you typed this out yourself and that you have 2 more stories you wrote in school.
Your talents abound :)
Dear Luca, What a wonderful story you wrote. I think that "Gideon up" is my very favorite part. Do you think that when you grow up you will be a writer? I think that you should consider it. Love, Martha.
gracias martha, storminomahoney and kbb.
eye think that when eye grow up eye wanna be a writer.
Luca! So happy that you are writing for our blog. Can't wait to read more of your stories.
Luca, man, eye have to agree.
Luca, are you by any chance eyetalian?
i luv lisette and the captain's jokes.
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